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MLP: Don't forget me by tan575 MLP: Don't forget me by tan575
Art by :iconcsimadmax:

Another comic strip of my favourite theme in MLP which is about Twilight and Shining Armor sibling relationship. Here, Twilight and Shining Armor shares a moment together the night before Shining Armor's real wedding.

Any comments?

EDIT:

For those interested on the other comics I wrote on Twilight and Shining Armor, here:

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:icongiromcalica:
Vision = The visual perspective and the character's facial expression and the way they act in certain proportions are mostly perfect. Twilight's request to be embraced by her brother symbolized the importance of a biological sibling.

Originality = This comic displays much originality, and I ain't seeing anythin' created by those handy dandy artists before the creation of this sack of gold. You'll be bringin' home the bacon if you make more of these stuff. Yee-haw!

Technique = Thou hast seen thy ways of making thou beautiful comic of love and affection that giveth from thine sibling. Thou art admire thy message of one's artwork. One's ability to create thy characters in thou digital world must been blessed by God.

Impact = ...

==FATAL ERROR==
Emotion.dll / affected by "MLP: Don't forget me by *tan575"
H://Program Files/Brain/Emotions/D'awww.app opened for various reasons.
GiromCalica | Reply; "D'awwww my heart pounded so much it asploded"

Overall = I just like it. You're one great artist. I'm used to comedy and stuff like that, but this... Never knew a sibling would be of importance. At least I have cousins (Most of them know me and some doesn't) to live life even more, thanks to this. Changed my life a little bit.

The End.
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Since the Artist would like a review, I would be happy to give one. First off Art work is very good. The writing is also well done. And is touching, and relatable to normal circumstances. The sky was a great addition, and it is original, add on to the Canterlot Wedding. You captured both characters personalities very well. I could very easily see this happening on the show. Your technique is very good but what I think what you excelled on was the impact. All in all. Very good short comic. And well deserving of its attention. It made me DAAAAA'WWW thank you.
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RainbowPony202 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Artist
So much feels 
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:iconrayana890:
rayana890 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I started crying because I miss my big brother. Were miles away he is the best big brother ever.:crying: rvmp 
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Ask-Tuskless-Axew Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daw sooo cute!
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DH90 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Kinda sad however that now Twi is an Alicorn, essentially she'll outlive Shining Armor
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Raven: Probably, but maybe artificial alicorns aren't immortal.
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kyuubinaruto18 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Friendship is Witchcraft made me wary through this that it was going to turn into a shipping picture somewhere along the way from the dialogue, especially, "Will you stay with me tonight?"  Glad it didn't go in that direction. Ugh. Dang shippers. >=(
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Zeroxee Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Meow :3 
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SnowyGodenheart Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
sweet just sweet
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CoolioHorse Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so sweet
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MaiTaniyamaGhostMag Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Writer
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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