Another comic strip of my favourite theme in MLP which is about Twilight and Shining Armor sibling relationship. Here, Twilight and Shining Armor shares a moment together the night before Shining Armor's real wedding.
Any comments?
EDIT:
For those interested on the other comics I wrote on Twilight and Shining Armor, here:
Since the Artist would like a review, I would be happy to give one. First off Art work is very good. The writing is also well done. And is touching, and relatable to normal circumstances. The sky was a great addition, and it is original, add on to the Canterlot Wedding. You captured both characters personalities very well. I could very easily see this happening on the show. Your technique is very good but what I think what you excelled on was the impact. All in all. Very good short comic. And well deserving of its attention. It made me DAAAAA'WWW thank you.
Vision = The visual perspective and the character's facial expression and the way they act in certain proportions are mostly perfect. Twilight's request to be embraced by her brother symbolized the importance of a biological sibling.
Originality = This comic displays much originality, and I ain't seeing anythin' created by those handy dandy artists before the creation of this sack of gold. You'll be bringin' home the bacon if you make more of these stuff. Yee-haw!
Technique = Thou hast seen thy ways of making thou beautiful comic of love and affection that giveth from thine sibling. Thou art admire thy message of one's artwork. One's ability to create thy characters in thou digital world must been blessed by God.
Impact = ...
==FATAL ERROR== Emotion.dll / affected by "MLP: Don't forget me by *tan575" H://Program Files/Brain/Emotions/D'awww.app opened for various reasons. GiromCalica | Reply; "D'awwww my heart pounded so much it asploded"
Overall = I just like it. You're one great artist. I'm used to comedy and stuff like that, but this... Never knew a sibling would be of importance. At least I have cousins (Most of them know me and some doesn't) to live life even more, thanks to this. Changed my life a little bit.
Originality = This comic displays much originality, and I ain't seeing anythin' created by those handy dandy artists before the creation of this sack of gold. You'll be bringin' home the bacon if you make more of these stuff. Yee-haw!
Technique = Thou hast seen thy ways of making thou beautiful comic of love and affection that giveth from thine sibling. Thou art admire thy message of one's artwork. One's ability to create thy characters in thou digital world must been blessed by God.
Impact = ...
==FATAL ERROR==
Emotion.dll / affected by "MLP: Don't forget me by *tan575"
H://Program Files/Brain/Emotions/D'awww.app opened for various reasons.
GiromCalica | Reply; "D'awwww my heart pounded so much it asploded"
Overall = I just like it. You're one great artist. I'm used to comedy and stuff like that, but this... Never knew a sibling would be of importance. At least I have cousins (Most of them know me and some doesn't) to live life even more, thanks to this. Changed my life a little bit.
The End.
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