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MLP: Don't forget me by tan575 MLP: Don't forget me by tan575
Art by :iconcsimadmax:

Another comic strip of my favourite theme in MLP which is about Twilight and Shining Armor sibling relationship. Here, Twilight and Shining Armor shares a moment together the night before Shining Armor's real wedding.

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For those interested on the other comics I wrote on Twilight and Shining Armor, here:

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:icongiromcalica:
Vision = The visual perspective and the character's facial expression and the way they act in certain proportions are mostly perfect. Twilight's request to be embraced by her brother symbolized the importance of a biological sibling.

Originality = This comic displays much originality, and I ain't seeing anythin' created by those handy dandy artists before the creation of this sack of gold. You'll be bringin' home the bacon if you make more of these stuff. Yee-haw!

Technique = Thou hast seen thy ways of making thou beautiful comic of love and affection that giveth from thine sibling. Thou art admire thy message of one's artwork. One's ability to create thy characters in thou digital world must been blessed by God.

Impact = ...

==FATAL ERROR==
Emotion.dll / affected by "MLP: Don't forget me by *tan575"
H://Program Files/Brain/Emotions/D'awww.app opened for various reasons.
GiromCalica | Reply; "D'awwww my heart pounded so much it asploded"

Overall = I just like it. You're one great artist. I'm used to comedy and stuff like that, but this... Never knew a sibling would be of importance. At least I have cousins (Most of them know me and some doesn't) to live life even more, thanks to this. Changed my life a little bit.

The End.
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Since the Artist would like a review, I would be happy to give one. First off Art work is very good. The writing is also well done. And is touching, and relatable to normal circumstances. The sky was a great addition, and it is original, add on to the Canterlot Wedding. You captured both characters personalities very well. I could very easily see this happening on the show. Your technique is very good but what I think what you excelled on was the impact. All in all. Very good short comic. And well deserving of its attention. It made me DAAAAA'WWW thank you.
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:icondrawingpegasus:
DrawingPegasus Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Awww!!
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:iconcaldorosa:
CaldoRosa Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
My heart is warm right now
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:iconrainbowpony202:
RainbowPony202 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Artist
So much feels 
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:iconrayana890:
rayana890 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I started crying because I miss my big brother. Were miles away he is the best big brother ever.:crying: rvmp 
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:iconmercedesstar:
Mercedesstar Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daw sooo cute!
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:icondh90:
DH90 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Kinda sad however that now Twi is an Alicorn, essentially she'll outlive Shining Armor
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Raven: Probably, but maybe artificial alicorns aren't immortal.
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:iconkyuubinaruto18:
kyuubinaruto18 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Friendship is Witchcraft made me wary through this that it was going to turn into a shipping picture somewhere along the way from the dialogue, especially, "Will you stay with me tonight?"  Glad it didn't go in that direction. Ugh. Dang shippers. >=(
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:iconzeroxee:
Zeroxee Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Meow :3 
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:iconsnowygodenheart:
SnowyGodenheart Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sweet just sweet
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:iconcooliohorse:
CoolioHorse Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
so sweet
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MaiTaniyamaGhostMag Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Writer
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icongerardreins:
gerardreins Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
its sad like what im going to have to do in two years sense im going to college and my little brother is going to be eleven then an im going to say the quote shining armor said!!
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:iconsadaslhey:
sadaslhey Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Student General Artist
....sniff.... s..so c.cutieeee ....sniff....
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:iconnatekiksace:
natekiksace Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww
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:iconmiracleworker2468:
MiracleWorker2468 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww.
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:iconcake4fluttershy:
Cake4Fluttershy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
I wish I have a nice sister :(
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:iconfantasyplayer00:
fantasyplayer00 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
so sweet my brother and sister is hugging again, without me.
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:iconanimefreakxd9:
animefreakXD9 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AWWWW!!!
so cute!
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:iconnancypaola:
nancypaola Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconvitrocitydawn:
VitrocityDawn Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
boner
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Raven: ...... Dude, you need some help.

Dr. X: .... Raven... Look at the profile picture......

Raven: .... Oh, great. Just when I thought I could get a break from the Slitheen!
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:iconkairaaethericbeast:
KairaAethericBeast Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Awww! ;w;
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:iconpetchricor:
Petchricor Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I used to have a BBBFF. He got married a little while ago and we hardly talk anymore. I really miss him. I read this comic when I'm missing him. It reminds me that even though I don't see him as often anymore he still loves me no matter what.
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:icon4dzi:
4dzi Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Critical hit! 
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:iconsonicfan39:
SonicFan39 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Hello there, I hope you don't mind, but my friend Nicolle and I loved this comic so much, that I produced a dub of it. I gave you full credit in for the comic, I hope you like it :3 
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tophjackson Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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:iconjust-call-me-minty:
Just-call-me-Minty Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Right in the feels.
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Very nice
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D15c0rdD3rpyH00v35 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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:icond15c0rdd3rpyh00v35:
D15c0rdD3rpyH00v35 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice
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:icondarthvader447:
DarthVader447 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
A Bro-Sis moment
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:icontmcnicol:
Tmcnicol Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Clean up on bedroom floor! Liquid pride is poring like a river!
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:iconthebestgamer100:
TheBestGamer100 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
best brother and sister relationship ever
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:iconvvolfeh:
vvolfeh Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Artist
:iconclapplz: Bravo.
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:iconcementinecutie13:
Cementinecutie13 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
:'(
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:iconmushroomdip:
MushroomDip Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
This is so well written, it almost made me cry!
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:iconpaulysentry:
PaulySentry Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh god, this is beautiful! Very beautiful! Great job! :)
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:iconjarkes:
Jarkes Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
DON'T YOU... *synth sounds* FORGET ABOUT ME!
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:iconidontrunntoofast:
idontrunntoofast Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
....sniff....
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:iconmegumiai:
MegumiAi Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute * cries *
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
nice job.
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:icon999lazerman:
999lazerman Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
their tails are cute in panel 4
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:iconseptagons:
Septagons Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Fourth Panel is just daww!
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:iconalfamaxis:
Alfamaxis Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
dawwww:3
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:iconhorses-n-history:
Horses-N-History Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwww
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012   General Artist
The fourth panel is the sweetest thing!! :D
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:iconkittehcrazy:
kittehcrazy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
awwww :3
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:iconxx-lillylove-xx:
xX-lillylove-Xx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So Sweet! ^^
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matty4z Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
daaw :3
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